Magnanimous Mother
"Mother" denotes a single interpretation, but its connotation varies in a broad range depending on one's perspective. For me, mother is far more intuitive and valuable than just someone who took care or gave birth to me. Mother..... is a life giver, pure sacrificial dilettante, obviously the most important person to me.
Every day I would receive her endless didactic anecdote, ones that would derive as a result of my dalliance and doodling, ones that would usually improve me and quelled my unpleasant manners. For that, I feel thankful. You are all rounded, equipped with versatility. You always monitor me, each and my every step is refined by your presence.
Every day I encounter a deleterious risk, you would be there. If it was about me, it would always be exigent to you. Even the for the most trivial concomitant that wouldn't concern you, you still precipitate in. For that again, I'm thankful. You are my talisman, a charm that would liberate me from all sort of danger. You are my well-wisher, and a supporter with patriotic perseverance.
For today, the day to express love to you, is not the only day I would like to like this. I would like to give you perpetual laud and extravagant praise. I might argue with you, but you are the only one who stood firm and deprecate to me with 100% attention. You are calm and tranquil like the world's zephyr, mitigating me whenever am over heated. For that, I am even more than thankful.
You support me in every way. Even with my perfidy you can endure. Even with my character you can stand. Thank you mom for you endless support and love that never fail to supply since the very first minute I was here. I LOVE YOU mom, may all the happiness blessed in you today and everyday. Hope you live long, and be with me for long as I will remember. Sorry for being a crass insolent child. I will make you proud. LOVE YOU KUB.
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ReplyDeletethank you kub vut
ReplyDeletedude, you intend it to be sentimental and tears-calling, but your overused formal term just contradict with your purpose of it. "Even for the most trivial concomitant that wouldn't concern you, you still precipitate in" come on !! mann, "you still step in" sounds far better. "Result of my dalliance and doddling" sounds like you're getting a boner, 'dalliance' is for sexual relationship and 'doodling' although means absent-minded sounds like doodle. "dilettante" is a person who cultivates an area of interest, such as arts, without real commitment or knowledge, so you're insulting your mother? come onnn !! And "didactic anecdote" make me LOL like shit, use 'bedtime story' would allow your reader to relate better. You're good at vocabs, this i know, you don't have to be so desperate to prove it, if you do, do it appropreately, don't overuse formal terms, it will just make your writing verbose and wordy and not goooooood. keep it up wei. ^__^
ReplyDeleteok thanks mak wei, so what will be a good proportion ? 70-30 ? or 60-40 ? Let's mix it right.
ReplyDeletethere is no definite formula, just make sure your vocab supplement and complemented your description/descriptive writing, that's all
ReplyDeletearghhhhh writingsssssss ok .... lemme try, just comment when am done
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